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NOTES FROM OTHERS:

Mikey11/25/0505:41
Perfection in pencil again another Friday another great installment of Negative One, for this installment while the drawings are much perfection in details notable Adele I think what really sticks out in this particular installment is the dialog.

With that said I will say this, coming from the heart of a writer it is most filled with all the perfection that always seems to come from you, a master mix of words and emotions that really grab the reader and entices the story to dare to read me. I LOVE IT!

The drawings are of course like I mentioned perfection and you give great justice to Adele, and the others. Adele is just awesome with her emotions and actions as always: 1,3,7,8,and 9 are in this reader's opinions the best as always I love the details of the eye! Fantastic detail to attention and once again Adele (so cute)!!!!!

Thanks for it all. Looking forward to the next installment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fred11/28/0510:33
Adele looks cute. Nice shading!! :)
Cara12/16/0513:50
Compared with the drawings in Adele #13, this is much improved. The lines are smoother and the shading, more even. That brings to mind that maybe this is fitting; Adele #13 had more tension between Tabitha and Adele, with the both of them standing opposite each other and harsher lines on the drawings. In Adele #14, these lines are softened and Adele and Tabitha are seen together within the panels. (Adele looks really cute in the first panel, by the way!)

I like that Adele has more monologue than usual this time. It offers more insight into her feelings, which is what I really care about. Awesome writing, as usual.

I also get to see Shelshay again later. That makes my day. I think this is one of the best comics Ivy's done so far, drawing and writing considered. :)

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