NOTES FROM OTHERS:
What a beautiful day yes it is Friday and my Negative One has arrived.
This installment while simple and to the point was great, the drawings are well captured with emotion see (1, 4, 5, 6, & 7 ) yes well captured indeed. And with an added bit of irony of what is being said by Fred in frame 9 (wow he has no idea) I really like that thought!
And the last frame while simple says quite a bit for the dispositon and lightheartedness of Fred.
The dialog of the story is straightforward, the drawings filled with emotions. What can I say another great installment of Negative One.
Say it with me, "Aww!"
With an sweet show of romantic cuteness, this comic makes me feel fluffy inside. That is, up until the point that I sneezed and then I just felt fuzzy.
I like that Meri Lin is having a natural reaction to this. That's my favorite thing about these comics; nothing seems to be "forced". Every character is acting out of their own mind, it seems like.
And once again, "Aww!" My favorite panel is the one where Meri Lin and Fred are hugging. <3
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