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NOTES FROM OTHERS:

Cara6/2/0523:04
This comic touches a chord with me; Meri Lin and I have something in common. Becoming too 'American' is considred bad by our families and it's ridiculous.

I have no complaints about the script (very good!) but the artwork is not as quite good as comic #2. Panel 6 is the one that needs the most improvement--her hand and phone are too small, especially since the phone was big enough to be seen in Panel 5 from the opposite side of her face and her eye size is much bigger in panel 6 than in 5.

I did really like the drawing of the photograph with the family in traditional Chinese garb--that was my favorite panel. :)

wingedpanda6/3/057:11
Fine, call us lurkers out. See if I care.

I'm reading - I like it. ^_^ Meri Lin is very cute.

Dan M.6/3/0510:47
I like that I can sort of get a feel for what this might be about and maybe where it's going. I would just advise that you don't wait too long to introduce some sort of action and forward motion to avoid risking it becoming stale.
As far as the art work, I really liked panels 3,5 and 8 mainly because you get a real good feel for the look of the characters. Again I like the different shades/colors for the different time frames which is actually really important to do.
The story is based on an interesting topic that I am somewhat familiar with. With this topic I think you could definitely make something of it. I am looking forward to the next comic mainly to see your art skills blossom further. Keep it up!
Fred6/3/0511:35
Meepmeepmeep!! I like your comic!! :) I look forward to reading more about the characters, and their personalities and backgrounds. You create really cool characters.
mikey6/5/056:46
Great drawings the story begins to take more form keep with it and keep me informed

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