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NOTES FROM OTHERS:

linguafranca5/27/056:44
I love your artwork. The first panel looks especially good. I'm a little confused about the story, but hey, it's only the second strip. :)
Dan M.5/27/0514:17
WOW! Your drawings are getting better and better! I'm very impressed!
I really liked everything about this comic so far. I have no clue what the correlation is between the first comic and this one, but again, that is what makes me want to see what is next.
I really liked how you switched to the lighter feeling blue-ish color for the "happy flashback" and then used the darker shade for the "present gloomy" parts of the comic. Again, good job! Yes Ma'am may I have another!
mikey5/27/0518:05
...it seems that another talent has surfaced boxes 5 and 9 are quite exceptional a good use of shade and definition they're in, I await to see what next comes keep me informed.
Cara11/4/0523:08
The robes! I like how they look heavy and give a feeling of prestige with them. A lot of people make robes flimsy looking with paper-thin hoods; I like that you did not go that route. I'm excited to see a younger version of a character I know from your books!

I like the backgrounds of panels 3 and 4. It's symbolic and very nice to look at. But my favorite part of this comic is how it whets my appetite for more about Adele.

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