NOTES FROM OTHERS:
|Again what a well drawn and well thought addition of Negative One the drawings are awesome Adele gets cuter and cuter with each passing installment. Her expressions are quite lovable and add such definition to her! I love the internal dialog and the emotion that is received within it it strikes a strong chord. With that said I can say that a perfect balance of emotion. And a special note about the Adele frames WOW so cute!!!!!!!!!!!|
Hehe, this the second most-anticipated event within the Negative One universe. At least, for me. The first is obviously Amanda's birth. Anyways, I loved how Adele's thoughts explained the flash. It had clarity and personality--it explained something completely unreal and made it fact.
I think this comic is very touching, too. My eyes burned a little at the end.
Oh, and this was my favorite image brought on by the dialogue: the idea of touching water that's flowing through another reality? That's mind-boggling, that's what.
|The last two frames were some very powerful story telling there, Smidget. One question though: They call it a "solar" eclipse on Shio too?|
|Now that we're getting some worldbuilding, I can't help but realize that we didn't get to see much of what Adele's world is like; whatever it's called, I forgot the name. Now we're about to leave it. Are we going to come back here later in the story? I'll have to keep reading to find out.|
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