NOTES FROM OTHERS:
|I find I really like the wording more and more each week as the story continues to develop, the fine points of what is needed to be done and how add such definition to it As for the drawings of the comic itself , 1,4&5 are really great use of technique but frame 7 is really the well fantastic oh and the line "I'm a teenager I'm supposed to be lazy" well placed keep me up to date.|
|All right, I don't have much critique available, but I just want to give you cudos for doing a great job. I'm loving where this is going!|
|Very good. I like this idea about how she shouldn't write any of it down. Did you come up with that on your own?|
Well, Tabitha looks suitably CREEPY with her eyes hidden in shadow like that.
I like that Adele's youth shines through her talent. I've read/seen too many young characters that act eons older just because they're clever at something. It must be hard for her, though - these exercises sound an awful lot like studying for an exam, which we all know sucks.
The idea that sentient beings are similar across dimensions is an intriguing one. Imagine if humans knew that; wouldn't it then seem silly that people are discriminated against for being of a different skin color when there were beings just as intelligent wearing fur instead of skin and horns instead of hair.
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