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Mikey 2/3/06 18:32

What can I say you have made Miss Adele so stunningly cute as usual, I truly think with all the wisdom and the thought given to her in how she acts and thinks that you could never go wrong with her. I would also like to bring mention to once again the dialog is again great!! And I would also like to add the metaphor was a perfect match to the story!!!!! really well written!!!!! Can't wait for the next!

Cara 2/24/06 23:30

Adele and Tabitha have very defined figures and faces; their features stand out more than usual, it seems. As for the writing, well, it was also wordier than usual because there was a lot of explanation and important dialogue.
The insight about the flash and Adele's ablities are the gems of this comic. :)

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Mikey	2/3/06	18:32
What can I say you have made Miss Adele so stunningly cute as usual, I truly think with all the wisdom and the thought given to her in how she acts and thinks that you could never go wrong with her. I would also like to bring mention to once again the dialog is again great!! And I would also like to add the metaphor was a perfect match to the story!!!!! really well written!!!!! Can't wait for the next!
Cara	2/24/06	23:30
Adele and Tabitha have very defined figures and faces; their features stand out more than usual, it seems. As for the writing, well, it was also wordier than usual because there was a lot of explanation and important dialogue. The insight about the flash and Adele's ablities are the gems of this comic. :)