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Bill 12/2/2023 13:46

Ivy sounds like a real 12 year old girl here - not like an adult in a kid's body like a lot of cartoons come across. And you do it in a way that keeps the story engaging, which is hard to pull off (tropes exist for a reason). And Dax is my spirit animal. I love reading this every week.

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Bill	12/2/2023	13:46
Ivy sounds like a real 12 year old girl here - not like an adult in a kid's body like a lot of cartoons come across. And you do it in a way that keeps the story engaging, which is hard to pull off (tropes exist for a reason). And Dax is my spirit animal. I love reading this every week.