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Monika10/9/212:30
Oh, so Alix‘ water breathing skill was a years-long set-up!
swankivy
I don't think of it like that--the story does what it does because of the strengths and limitations of its characters. I didn't invent Alix and everything everyone's been through with him because I need a character who can build underwater. I have a story where that is possible because he's in it, and his existence isn't a long game played so this one rather minor problem could be solved. (For that matter I could have just made portals openable not in water, but sometimes writing it feels more like I figured out existing laws instead of inventing them, even though I know that's not true.)

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