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Mongoose 4/6/19 07:36

You handle characters in general extraordinarily well (which is why I keep reading); but what you've been doing with Alix is a tour de force. Gradually, and utterly convincingly, he's grown from a selfish jerk into the mature, brave, kind character we see in today's episode. Many published writers could learn from you. Chapeau!

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Mongoose	4/6/19	07:36
You handle characters in general extraordinarily well (which is why I keep reading); but what you've been doing with Alix is a tour de force. Gradually, and utterly convincingly, he's grown from a selfish jerk into the mature, brave, kind character we see in today's episode. Many published writers could learn from you. Chapeau!