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M. Lee 10/5/14 0:40

Nice to see them all finding a comfortable zone and get back to cooperating instead of picking at each other. Even though I wouldn't have faulted Alix too much for being indignant at having his ID used for a purpose he's to be kept in the dark about.

Stuart Gathman 10/9/14 10:07

So how does this tribe do their "business"? Bury it in the sand? Will Adele teach Ivy how to dig a hole? We've seen that Ivy's invisible "hands" can be burned by heat - but presumably they don't get dirty? Does Ivy just do her business in the air, and let it fall where it may?
These pressing questions are rarely addressed in fiction.

CobaltDrake 10/10/14 16:51

I really liked the expression on Alix' face here. He seems to be trying, as he was the first to volunteer to go get a fish, and once he has decided to agree, the fact that all he asks for a little more money for is "little presents for the others". It's nice to see a complexity in him, that he's not just a snarky annoying guy. (Especially since we never hear/see in his voice.)

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M. Lee	10/5/14	0:40
Nice to see them all finding a comfortable zone and get back to cooperating instead of picking at each other. Even though I wouldn't have faulted Alix too much for being indignant at having his ID used for a purpose he's to be kept in the dark about.
Stuart Gathman	10/9/14	10:07
So how does this tribe do their "business"? Bury it in the sand? Will Adele teach Ivy how to dig a hole? We've seen that Ivy's invisible "hands" can be burned by heat - but presumably they don't get dirty? Does Ivy just do her business in the air, and let it fall where it may? These pressing questions are rarely addressed in fiction.
CobaltDrake	10/10/14	16:51
I really liked the expression on Alix' face here. He seems to be trying, as he was the first to volunteer to go get a fish, and once he has decided to agree, the fact that all he asks for a little more money for is "little presents for the others". It's nice to see a complexity in him, that he's not just a snarky annoying guy. (Especially since we never hear/see in his voice.)