NOTES FROM OTHERS:
|they shouldn't feel so bad that Amanda has only 4 fingers. After all, it makes her easier to draw. Nice details on her development. It seems every telekine I've seen in fiction was born with their power, but developed like a normal human. It's good to show you've put more thought into it.|
|I so have to agree with Setzer, you put your finger on it, for all of the differences in this story, there is a strong and natural common sense that I appreciate, especially since that's the hardest thing to keep in a story. That sense of realism.|
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