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NOTES FROM OTHERS:

Fred4/28/0611:54
"Don't feed pot brownies to wild animals, dumbass!"

LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Victor the SHO5/12/061:59
Mmmmm, cremated weenies and wacky-tobaccy brownies! The breakfast of champions, dirty hippies and flash abductees. Why does one hippy always have on a vest? That's the formal hippy! When that one hippy says there's something weird in the bushes, had he stepped in a "Dax Present"? The hippy chick was cute, but aren't they always?

Did I enjoy this installment? Does a Dax poop in the woods? Check out the fourth drawing and pass the mustard. >;^D#

Cara1/15/0718:28
New narrator! Can I handle it?

It's interesting to follow his train of thought as he readjusts to this new world Dax has found himself in. I like the little hints to his past that he can't figure out... it makes me curious about where he came from.

*giggle* Pot brownies.

Nim7/20/20242:08
Dax's narratorial debut! It's interesting to consider the shape a sapient being's thoughts might take after they've "lost their words." Even knowing that this arc with the hippies ends with Dax feeling unsettled and betrayed by the sharp moral divide between them, I can't think of a better first encounter with humanity—they're welcoming and curious (just like him!) where so many others, sober or not, would have reacted with instinctual fear and defensive violence.

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