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NOTES FROM OTHERS:

Cara1/21/0611:27
Yes yes yes. This comic is extremely satisfying for those who have wanted to see more dimension added to this "prophet business". And by "those" I mean ME!

I've noticed a definite improvement in the *movement* of the characters. Hand, arm and in fact, entire body positioning is much more real-feeling than before; like when Adele is playing with her hair or pointing at the paper. Keep this up because it looks great!

I also like that you have set up a background in the first frame that corresponded with the lighting in the rest of the comic.

I think the best artwork is when the subject is a close to medium distance away from the reader. When it gets farther away, the realism slips a little bit, and looks more cartoon-y like the second to last panel. But that's all the criticism and compliments I'm giving out this week.

(Negative is good, people! Read it!)

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