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NOTES FROM OTHERS:

Fred 6/24/05 17:15

I think the way you are telling the story is pretty clever, rather brilliant actually. I like how you are running the Adele and Meri Lin storylines in parallel. I don't think you have attempted this before in your writing, and it seems like you are really maturing and improving as a writer.

Mikey 6/24/05 20:53

I love the way the story is building in a steady pace slowly revealing the mystery of what is beginning to unfold I would also like to give you praise on the closeups really fantastic details!!!!!

Cara 7/22/06 14:15

Yay, more prophet business!
And thank goodness, it's not being explained like its a cheesy sci-fi flick ploy -- thank you! (Also I find it cute that Tabitha has trouble pronouncing words in Adele's native langauge. It also allows her to escape the "wise old friend" cliche, once again.)
The explanation for dimension stuff really makes sense. ::grin:: "Ignorant human-place" huh? That makes even more sense.
I like how this comic used zoom-ins and expression; it kept the art interesting, even though this time it took a back seat to the information presented.

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Fred	6/24/05	17:15
I think the way you are telling the story is pretty clever, rather brilliant actually. I like how you are running the Adele and Meri Lin storylines in parallel. I don't think you have attempted this before in your writing, and it seems like you are really maturing and improving as a writer.
Mikey	6/24/05	20:53
I love the way the story is building in a steady pace slowly revealing the mystery of what is beginning to unfold I would also like to give you praise on the closeups really fantastic details!!!!!
Cara	7/22/06	14:15
Yay, more prophet business! And thank goodness, it's not being explained like its a cheesy sci-fi flick ploy -- thank you! (Also I find it cute that Tabitha has trouble pronouncing words in Adele's native langauge. It also allows her to escape the "wise old friend" cliche, once again.) The explanation for dimension stuff really makes sense. ::grin:: "Ignorant human-place" huh? That makes even more sense. I like how this comic used zoom-ins and expression; it kept the art interesting, even though this time it took a back seat to the information presented.